🔱♆ The Journey To Atlantis 🔱♆

In our learning experiences we had to right(write) a personal writing, I had trouble finishing it I had to wake up at 6:45 am on Friday last week to finish this story but these are things that I thought I was proud of  

I am proud of myself because I worked really hard on this story and saw that I used said all trough my writing. I made changes to said to show how people said things.

 Some thing that challenged me was choosing what characters to be in my story. 

 I have been working on using sentence starters.  

I hope you like my story 

Chapter One:

🔱♆ The Journey To Atlantis 🔱♆

“Luke Noooooo!!!!” I yelled.

“HELP ME BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP!!!” Luke Yelled.

I quickly woke up and turned off my alarm and mumbled  “Man, I am having some cwazy dreams this year,”. I went to the kitchen to get some breakfast. then Lachlan woke up and babbled “Man, I am having some cwazy dreams this year,” .

“CAN YOU PLEASE STOP HAVING THE SAME DREAMS AS ME, IT ALWAYS, EVERY SINGLE TIME GETS US INTO TROUBLE,” I Yelled.

“It’s not my fault ya pit sniffer.” announced Lachlan.

“OK then we need to be ready for whatever comes around the corner - “ I explain.

Just then Luke and Finn came busting through

the door Yelling “IT’S THE APOCALYPSE, RUN AWAY,”.

“You hide in the fridge I’ll hide under the bed and you 2 you just stay right there too burn into ashes. now GO GO GO RUN AWAY!!!!” Luke yells.

“Oh no run away,” I say in a annoyed voice. I opened the fridge and pulled finn out and Lachlan went to get Luke and we all went into the lounge and talked. “so what made you think it was the apocalypse,” Lachlan says.

“We found th.. this note a.. At the d.. door,” says Finn Terrified . I snatched the note of Finn and it said

The apocalypse is coming.  Run while you still can.  

By Marcus  

(Marcus is one of Luke and Fins Bullies)

“WOW how dumb are you guys”. I say

Chapter Two:

🔱♆ The Troops 🔱♆

“What we're not Dumb, See ask me any maths question,” says Luke.

“ 1 ➕ 1 So what does it equal,” Says Lachlan.

“Oh well I didn't mean that hard but I can still do it, Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm……. Ummmmmmmm,”.

“JUST SAY IT,” Yells Lachlan.

“OK It is 43,” Luke says in a very smart voice

“Why am I friends with you 2,” I say.  BOOM!!!!!! As the door smashed open with T running through the smoke with a piece of paper in his hand.  

“What are you doing here?” Lachlan asked.

“I found this,” T handed me the piece of paper. but it wasn't any old piece of paper with writing on it, it was a sign of life it was a code message. “I haven't found out what it has said but I thought this would be another strange adventure that all of us could solve Together.

“I told you that having the same dreams as me would not be good,” I Describe to Lachlan.

“Well it’s all my problem ea,” Lachlan announced.

“OK we will go on your little adventure but only if you figure out the code BY …… YOUR …… SELF ……" I yell  

“Fine but you have to get the weapons,” T says to me

“OK, Let's Go,” I say

Chapter Three:

🔱♆ The Code  🔱♆

So we went to grab all of the weapons and packed our bags now all we have to do is figure out the code. well T sat down on the chair but after about 3 seconds Finn pushed everyone out of the way and said “OK pit sniffers this is what I think it says hmmmmmmmmmmmmm OMG IT SAYS IT’S THE APOCALYPSE!!!!!! now we will both swap I will go into the fridge and you will hide under the Table and you guys just stay right there  to burn into ashes. now GO GO GO RUN AWAY!!!!” Finn Yells.  They both tried to run away but me T and Lachlan stopped them before they could go anywhere then we locked them in the cupboard until we were finished so T sat back down and started to work and me and Lachlan went down stairs and watched some TV we Just sat down and… T came bursting in yelling “I've got it I've got it, Follow me,” So we both followed him up into the attic “What are you doing?” asks Lachlan T started to look through boxes and shelves “I’m looking for three books,” T handed us a piece of paper and the coded message “That piece of paper is the translated message,”

“OK just saying where did you find this message in the first place?” I ask

“In my PRINTER 2000,” Says T

“What is a PRINTER 2000.” I say

“It receives any message from avery satellite facility,” says T

“OH, Good job,” Me and Lachlan both say T kept Searching until he found three books He opened the books and saw three different maps in each book then he ripped out each map

“HEY those cost money ya know,” says Lachlan

Then he went to get some paper and some tape and 2 boxes he put the 2 boxes down spread apart and then he taped the paper to each box and lined up all the maps to made one weird shaped map and he put a lamp under the piece of paper so we could see the maps perfectly “There that's the map,” T tells us

“What's that?” asks Lachlan

“Coordinates,” T says

“So now we have the map all we have to do is print about 10 copies and we are ready to go,”  I say

Chapter Four:

🔱♆ Mysterious island 🔱♆

After we printed out the maps we went to the airport and left to go to palau (nair palau is where the coordinates leed us to) When we arrived Lachlan got his remote out to his boat and his pressed come and there came his boat out of nowhere We all hopped on the boat “Um I’m not much of a boat person,” annonces Finn

“Just get on,” I say So Lachlan was driving T was Directing us I was on lookout and Luke and Finn were inside watching TV.  We drove for hours maybe days maybe 10 minutes Then the boat started to shake and there was a huge cloud of fog in front of us “What is That?” asks T then the boats controls went out of control and we went into the cloud it was foggy for a bit but then there were at least 5 hurricanes in front of us and we were going straight for the biggest one.  We all ran inside the boat when we got on we saw that Luke and Finn didn't notice anything I pushed them over so all of us could fit on (We went the couch because we all wanted to die in comfort “Hey you guys here to watch the rest of the movie it’s almost finished?”  Finn asks us

“NO WE ARE NOT HERE TO WATCH THE REST OF THE MOVIE, WE ARE JUST ABOUT TO DRIVE INTO A CATEGORY 5 HURRICANE,” I yell

“So,” says Luke Then pulled him off the couch and made him look at the hurricane

“I told you guys it was the apocalypse,” Says Luke we all sat down on the couch and yell “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH,” BOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!! As we crashed Into the hurricane then we all got knocked out.  “Max, Max, wake up, Well we're here,” says T

“WOW, this is awesome,” says Luke and Finn

“well where here,” I say

Chapter Five:

🔱♆ Atlantis 🔱♆

We started looking around But it wasn't much of an Island it was kindof just a round beach Then Finn says “Guys look I found a cave,”

The cave was little but big enough for all of us to get through when we got in it was all spider webby and gross but then we saw a light and when we got out this is what we saw   

   

“WOW, this is way better than that beach,” Says Lachlan

“I liked the beach beach beter,” Says Finn

“OK troops let's go exploring get your maps out and follow m… What the, Is that the,” I say This is what we saw

I picked it up it was a tiny elephant “WOW,” yells Lachlan

“It’s just like in the book I brought, Big things become small and small things become big,” Says T

“Well, we will need to be careful of the small things then,” annonces Lachlan So we kept moving Luke and Finn were taking pictures of everything they saw me and Lachlan were enjoying the walk and T was walking around touching everything for some reason and he was looking confused “What's wrong,” I asked Then he started to turn really happy and he pulled a huge piece of mold of the wall and said “Do you see these markings these were supposed to be gone 1 million years ago, these markings are from the king of Atlantis,” says T

“So, What's wrong with that?” asks Luke

“Is a king aloud to draw,”

“This shows that the lost city of atlantis is on this Island,” T says

“SAY WHAT!!!!!!!,” Lachlan yells

“Well we are going to be very rich when we tell the government that we found this,” Says Lachlan

“NO!! Don’t tell them because they will destroy it and then they will be richer than us much richer,” Yells T

“OK don’t tell the government,” I say

“Who’s the govemment, Just kidding I know who he is he that guy up there with a fork,” Says Finn

“What guy,” says T finn pointed to the king of atlantis's statue

We went over to it and then we found it Atlantis

“OMG, OMG!!!!!,” we all yell

“Well, here is the lost city of atlantis,” I say we started to walk up the bridge we all split up to take photos but then the ground shook and the water rises “T what was that,” Lachlan asked

“Oh No, Oh No, Ohhhhhh Noooooooo,” T says

“This Island is going under in about 30 minutes,” T says again

“What do you mean this Island going under,” I asked

“we need to move,” says T we followed T back to the beach but we could only see about a meter of it “OK I’ll call my submarine,” I say

“No it will get smashed the needs to be a driver in it,” says T

Then T ran to the other edge and there was a ladder going into the water

“How do you know about this and why can’t we stay here and just were a life jacket,” says Luke

“Because you would die because of the volcano and the waves, so we need to get under there to get into the submarine and no questions I don’t like to talk about it so get in these scuba diving suits and I will see you down there,” T says as he dived down then we all followed him the submarine was huge and T was already in when we got in T pressed a button and said”this is Terenzo kwok pollok in,” then it started but then everything moved and the Island started moving down T smashed the boost button and we went flying out “YAAAAAYYYYYYY,” we all yelled then we went under the hurricane and we were going back to palau and we sold the submarine and got heaps of money so that was the Journey to atlantis we didn't really stay there that long but we got heaps of photos.

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