I am poem

I AM POEM

In our hub we have been doing a I am poem.  We are doing an I am poem for the teachers to see what we like or what we love doing we also did it for the reader to think.

I am proud of myself because I have been working really hard on my I am poem.

Some thing that challenged me was thinking what to wright(write) for the I see.

 I have been working on wrighting(writing) for the reader.

 

Here is the success criteria I hope you like My I am poem.

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am Amazing

I wonder how huskies survive in the cold

I hear the sound of the telephone ringing

I see the rugby ball flying across the field

I want to become a great archaeologist

I am Amazing

I pretend I am an antarctic Husky

I feel the soft fur of Huskies

I touch the X - box controller

I worry about the earth if it’s going to disappear

I cry when I get in a fight with my Dad

I am Amazing

I understand my - ➕ ⨉ ➗

I ask questions lots of questions   

I dream of me being a husky leaping in the snow

I try to have a good dream

I hope I will get lots of presents for my birthday

I am Amazing