Monday, August 10, 2015

Country life is better than City life - Term 3 Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language


Country life is better than city life
 
I strongly believe that country life is better than city life.


First the country has more room so that you can play tag and hide and seek and lots of other games.  But in the city you just have a backyard that is usually 20 metres.  Furthermore there are lots of forests to play in but in the city there are hardly any forests.


Another reason is In the country you are more healthy but in the city there is lots of cars that drive around and make the air dirty.  Also there are more trees in the country that make the air clean.


Finally the country has more room to build stuff like tree huts in the forest and you can put up the tent and camp outside.  There are lots of stuff to build in the country because there is lots of wood to build things.                                                                                                   
Therefore that is why I believe country life is better than city life.

                                                                                                                                              

3 comments:

  1. That was an amazing blog post Max, but I think you should make some of your paragraphs a bit more longer and a bit more detailed.

    From the best Dan

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  2. nice wrck max I like the way you said Therefore insted of writing in my opinion. : )

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  3. Great story you hooked me in at the start i would rather the city.

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