In our hub we have writing goals. You could choose out of vocabulary, punctuation and sentence starters. I chose sentence starters, so in this story I have tried my best to add sentence starters to my story. We have been able to chose out of three ideas the ideas were this week slippery surface, Tooth coming out and Animal. I chose Animal, But this story is about a ware wolf and my freinds so I hope you enjoy my story
I am learning to add punctuation and sentence starters to my writing
I am proud of myself because I have tried my best
To add punctuation to show the reader how to read my story and sentence starters to my writing
I hope you like my writing and enjoy it
THE CREATURE
BOOM as the thunder and rain was pouring down, my dad (Douglas) was running away from the creature. He saw a 350 meter deep ditch in front of him and he was thinking “I can make it, I can make it”, As he got to the hole, he jumped and he said "I'm not going to make it," missed and fell. I quickly woke up and looked at my brother Lachlan. He was doing the exact same thing as I was doing. After that We both looked at each other and went to the kitchen and talked about our dream “So we had the exact same dream,” I said “Well I think so,” said Lachlan “Well something's going really wro...,” BANG... SMASH... CRASH... “What, was that,” I said “I don’t know, Why you are asking me,” said Lachlan. We both slowly walked outside I looked behind me Lachlan was crying. We walked down the driveway shivering and we saw a man on the ground moving around.“Um excuse me, um what are you doing?” I said. Slowly, he turned around and when he turned around we both saw his red eyes. He started to change form. When he had changed form he had a hunch back and he was covered with fur. Slowly, he looked at us. Me and Lachlan stared at him, then we both had a flashback of the creature that our dad meet. After the flash back we looked at the thing and when it was walking away I saw the gunshot that my dad gave the werewolf and a big scratch from my dad's knife. I realised it was the same one “That guy has the dumb he cannot brain today,” I said “Well we have to track that crack sniffer down,” said Lachlan “Yes, yes we do,” I said “But we need to round up the troops,”.
CHAPTER TWO:
THE TROOPS
The first people we went to get was Luke and Finn. They are two of our friends (They are brothers if you didn't know) We knocked on the door “Knock” “Knock” Luke opened the door “Well, Hello there, it’s been a while,” he said “Come in”. When we went into the house, we went outside and talked. “So you know what happened to our dad,” I said. “Yes, what about it,” said Finn. “Um about that creature,” I said. Luke and Finn both had drinks in their mouths. “We meet the same one that dad did,” I said. Luke and Finn both spat out their drinks onto both of us. “DID YOU REALY, DID YOU, DID YOU, COME ON DID YOU!!!,” They both said. “YES!!!!,” Me and Lachlan said. “OK no need to yell,”.“So about us meeting him we need your help to track him down,” said Lachlan. “WHAAAAAAAAAAT,” They both said once again.“Yes we need you to come with us to find the WEREWOLF,” Me and Lachlan both said again. “OK we will do do it,” Finn says. So the next person we went to get was T (Terenzo in other words) we knocked on the door “Bang” “Bang” T opened the Door “Hi come in,”. We went into the lounge. “So why are you here,” said T. “We need your help you know about our dad,” I said. “Yeah,” said T.“Well we found the creature that he meet,”.“WHAAAAAAAAAAT,” said T.“DID YOU REALY, DID YOU, DID YOU, COME ON DID YOU!!!” said T. “LOOK WE'RE NOT GOING OVER THIS AGAIN!!!!!!!” Me and Lachlan said again. “So we need you to come with us to track him down,” said Lachlan.“WHAAAAAAAAAAT,” said T.“YES what,” I said. T sat there and thought for a while “OK I’ll do it,” T says. “YAAAAAAY,” we all yell.“But, only if I get weapons,” said T. “We have got heaps at home, So let’s go,” I said.
CHAPTER THREE:
THE WEREWOLF
After that we went to me and Lachlan's House and collected all of the weapons. When I looked over T had piles of stuff in front of him (I see why he wanted weapons). After that I just gave him what everyone else had, a voice activated backpack with every weapon in the world. All you have to do is say witch weapon you want and it appears in your hands “OK, I have got the antidote to turn the werewolf back into a man, is everyone ready,” I said. “YES,” everyone said.
“OK let’s go,” I said So we set out on our adventure into the forest. We looked and looked all through the forest but we couldn't find him. It was night we found the old camp site in the forest and settled down. We all got our stuff out and went to sleep. After about half an hour I woke up and turned around after I had a flash in my dream of the werewolf in a bush. I looked behind me and Lachlan was doing the same thing again but behind Lachlan was the werewolf. “ya ba ge ka loka th at bi hind you, don’t move,” I said to Lachlan luckily all of the other boys woke up but they didn't move. Then Lachlan slowly turned around and saw it “OMG,” he said then the werewolf jumped out at Lachlan but Lochie duked and the wolf fell into the trap and all of the boys held him so he didn't escape and I put the antidote into him. Then we unraveled the trap and the werewolf slowly turned back. Then we just stared at the man he slowly turned around then we realised that the werewolf was the whole time our dad then me dad and Lachlan fainted Then the boys carried us home when we woke up we all asked about what happened to Douglas He said that the story was wrong but the ware wolf did get him but they mixed up their DNA and then the actual ware wolf died and he became the ware wolf after that we bought new house and it was next to Luke and Finns house then we went on great adventures together and we even became bionic.
